FocusedFINN's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cher La Vie]

Breakfast Club :D

Sounds 80's...a little choppy but...pretty sweet at the same time!

rkellow responds:

ha yeah, i know, it's just a rough demo right now, thanks!

[Fall Hard.]

I really like this. Kind of summed up my day :\

Feel really tired. But anyway. Really like this a lot I wish it was longer. 5\5 10\10

I know this is is hot off the drawing board, but would you mind if I attempted remix?
Not to make 'better' necessarily, just longer?

ChristianMossuto responds:

currently working on it,

[Help Me...]

Thanks for the heart attack at 0:52

I jumped. lol. But seriously though, nice song.

Loved the beat throughout the song and the sequence at the end. Good stuff thanks for submitting.

Now...to flip on the lights....

AtokNiiro responds:

Thanks for the review, I am glad you like it :D
That door knocking seems to have a much creepier effect, than I expected :P

[Inside the Castle]

Felt like I was there...

I really like this. I'm all about songs that tell a story and this is a perfect example. My favorite part was the way it was all integrated into one, like no matter where the person went the people were playing similar melodies, but in different ways. It's like they were united through music.

Great use of sound effects, too. I thought it ended pretty suddenly though.

AtokNiiro responds:

Thank you for the review, you described it exactly as my intentions with it were :D
And yea, it does end suddenly, but at the time I finished it, I couldn't really come up with something better :/

[Computers Can't Have Concerts]

I love this it's different....

...and it paints a strange picture in my mind of my computer partying when i'm not home. HAHA!

If painting that picture was the goal, it is achieved

BaronVonBadGuy responds:

Well, that wasn't the intended visual goal, but the I'm glad this song managed to conjure such a vision in your mind.
Also, glad you liked it so much.

[<Transformation>]

Pretty good

I'm not so good at judging works in progress.

I was a little distracted by the clap I think it could be turned down a little bit. Assuming this is the intro, I think it would be awesome if suddenly the song picked up with a really memorable and faster paced melody. That way, the song could make a TRANSFORMATION!!!

Get it? Transforma...... nevermind :(

[Burned Nation]

AHHHH the potential

This gave me chills. It painted a vivid picture in my mind of like...the horrors of war or the end of the world...

Passionate and flawless. Please finish it!

Leimrey responds:

I sure will! Thank you!

[[DN] The First Angel {Demo}]

wooooooooooooooooo get up and dance

I'm in love with 0:35...the rewind effect! How's it done?

Full length version soon please :)

DanceNation responds:

just an FX :)

[[DN] Techno Rocker {Remix}]

Are you readyyy?

0:00 through 0:25 was my favorite part but it was all amazing

A big ol' 5\5 10\10 from this guy.

DanceNation responds:

Thanks!!

[22 Degrees]

It's good.

I think more could be added. I know the frozen feeling of the song might call for no drum beat, but I really felt like some well placed drums were lacking near the end, like around 2:40 or so. Maybe just something simple to change it up.

Just my opinion. Anyway, I liked it.